- Siobhan Muir | @SiobhanMuir
- Charles W. Jones | @ChuckWesJ
- Bill Engleson | @billmelaterplea
- Sheilagh Lee | @SweetSheil
- Daelyn Morgana
- Katheryn J. Avila | @katheryn_avila
- Cate Derham | @Cate_Derham
- Silver James | @SilverJames_
- Deelylah Mullin | @VampBard
- Kelly Heinen | @Aightball
- Paige Prince | @Paige_Prince
Deelylah Mullin | @VampBard
Marci says: Another well-written piece. It feels like there's more of a story here than just a scene. However, it gives us enough information to know the characters, know the situation, and to be a complete story.
Silver James | @SilverJames_
Marci says: This is a good scene. It does, however, feel more like a scene from a story than a flash fiction piece. It's very good, though.
Kel Heinen | @Aightball
Marci says: This one was close to winning, but for this line: His blue eyes swept the room and covered his face, his shoulders heaving... I'm not quite sure what he meant by "covered his face". Also, it's too literal. The rest of it was quite good.
Paige Prince | @Paige_Prince
Marci says: It's tight and a complete story. Very succinct and well written.
*Break it off, or you’ll both be sorry.*
The crude block handwriting had been meant to obscure the identity of the blackmailer, but he had a pretty damn good idea who’d taken the pictures. Who had balls the size of Texas enough to send shit like this in the mail but her?
Ice clinked against the glass as he reached for his scotch. His father would roll over in his grave in he’d known that Mark took his alcohol any way but neat. Or that he’d married a fucking banshee who had no compunction about blackmail after he’d literally given her everything they’d ever purchased as a married couple—and some things he had before he’d ever met her—in the divorce. Mark swallowed the lump in his throat along with a hefty swig of Macallan.
He could do no more. Either Marilyn would be satisfied with what he'd already given her, or she’d turn the pictures into the board. But he wasn’t going to be her fucking lapdog anymore.
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