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George says: I really liked the emotion. There was a lot of it in a short tale but I got lost in who was talking. Was it only Marcus speaking or did his partner talk as well.
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George says: Silver James: Good tale with great detail but I was a little confused by it. My initial response was Eli was trapped as much as Talin yet you learn that he has a cover as an interrogator. So why would the thugs come in if he was in the room.
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George says: Creepy with the right amount gore, good level of intensity. If the door is the only way in or out my concern is how are they going to get out if they push everything up against it.
“None of this makes any sense,” Molly cried. “This must be some experiment. I think we are being watched.”
The pure anguish of her words acted as an unwelcomed truth.
“You really think that someone is watching us like we’re in the Big Brother House?” Quinn snapped.
“Others out there need our help,” Molly said. She rubbed her temples. “If we sit here, we are sitting ducks. That door isn’t going to hold them off too much longer. And what are we going to do with a rickety cane and a baseball bat?”
The sound of hands beating and scraping against the wooden door propelled us to act. We couldn’t just wait for them to knock the door in, which they soon would.
“Let’s push everything we have in front of the door.”
“It’s our only way out.”
“It’s their only way in.”
“Do you have any better ideas?” Quinn asked.
My limbs tingled as if small push pins poked through every pore. I forgot to breathe.
Another sharp scream punched the tense air.
We had to make it out alive, and living.
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