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Decadent says: This scene has wonderful sensory details showing the scenery and drawing the reader inside with the character.
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Decadent says: Well crafted sentences provided a fluid read, one where a sentence posed a question but then flowed right into the answer with the next sentence- Syntax- truly wonderful syntax.
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Decadent says: The amusement in this scene really brought it to life at the end. there was a solid build up and a twist that made me giggle. Humor can be a huge motivator to a reader.
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Decadent says: The scene drew me in with fluidity and dialogue which really brought out the character. I could hear him talking and as a reader connected to something primal inside myself because of it.
“Do you understand why you are here?”
Her nostrils flared and her pupils dilated. I saw each of her reactions, minute and telling.
“You know why.”
“No, I do not. You must tell me.”
“I want you.”
“You want me to do what?”
She threw up her hands, the odor of her frustration singed my Wolf senses like a sulfur match flaring in the dark. “I don’t know!”
“You must decide, dorogaya, and tell me. This is a requirement before we go further.”
“Gah. Are you trying to play Fifty Shades with me?”
I did not laugh. “This is no game.” I rose. Stalked her. Trapped her against the closed door.
“Each time I touch you, your emotions are exposed. You cannot hide them—or yourself—from me so do not try. I see everything, dorogaya. There in your eyes, the raw need. Your body is wet, aching for me.”
She licked her lips, eyes huge as she nodded.
“I have a deep desire to know how much your body can take. How much before you let those sensations take control of you. To have you bare and open. To make you feel and not resist.”
“Yes,” she whispered. “That is what I want.”
I stripped her naked. “Da. There you are. Raw. Unguarded. Now we begin.”
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